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I am not exactly sure how this passed judgment, but let me say that this was completely uninspired. I doubt you took longer than fifteen minutes to make this.
Here are some helpful tips:
1) Don't make sideshows. You can just as easily do that with PowerPoint. I like to think that we, on Newgrounds, are better than that.
2) Write better.
3) Use the line tools so that your artwork is composed of vectors. Not only is the paint tool harder to work with, it increases the amount of vectors more than a tenfold, thus increasing the size of your flash. Not that the file was too large, but if your were to work on a real project, you'd need to start using the line tool.
4) Use audio from the audio portal. 'Nuff said.
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It was hard, but I really enjoyed it. It gave me real satisfaction to finish it. Make more! Good Job!
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Wow! I suck! I got a 892... the key is to only control one ball at a time as to not be retarded...
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Toof was, and still is a great series. Me and many others have followed this series through the weeks and have come to love it. One of my little pleasures every week (besides ranting on the flash forum) was to watch the next Toof episode and I really loved doing so.
I'm not exactly sure why you're going to stop the Toof series on newgrounds (which I really hope you didn't), but I, among many other fans, will still folow the magical journey of your site.
Author's Response:
Lol@Magical journey :P
Check out the commentary at the end, I explain.
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You lucky son of a bitch for finding such a... let me just say: "fap... fap... fap"!
Thanks for sharing the pictures... I mean... WOW!!!
...and the music fits it SO SO well!!! Did you use Finale or Sibelius to make the music or something else??? anyways... the music was so great (although not as good as "THE one"...
*adds to favorites
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Oh my god this is THE best flash I have ever seen in my life!
Yes... I was expecting a follow-up on Field Command number two, and I do know many loved your previous ones A LOT better, but for me... no... this one had much more feeling and kinda brang a tear to my eye to be honest...
...and the music was so well done and it moved and cradled the feelings this flash was trying to prevail and now I am left speechless. I am in great awe!
I imagine myself as one of those Indians and it IS sad. This exposes what many Holywood movies try to explain, and it IS done well...
Overall (although there were quite a few glitches) this was "masterwork" and it felt like I was viewing a professional's work... keep up the good work and make #4!!!
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Those platformer codes awfully look similar to Rantzen's in the Flash Forum in his topic "I've made a jumping engine for all".
The other codes are basic so you probably made them... but that platformer code...
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I help not but to feel sad for that guy and that was a very interesting interperatation of that song... lol...
I absoulutedly loved your artwork and animation. It inspires me to try harder on my flashes and it just makes me feel, for the lack of a better word, good!
Great animation!
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So many shooting tutorials don't work but this one does.
I am strating a shooting game, with the help of this tutorial and I just love it. Thanxs... I'll thank you in my flash (if it get's past judgement).
Thanxs alot!!!
One thing tho... How do you make multiple enemies???
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This piece o' crap got passed judgement???
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